Just realized as I was…

Just realized as I was retyping the book that the first scene is very clearly echoing the first scene in A Wrinkle in Time. Did I do that on purpose? I can't remember. Regardless, I'm okay with that. It's such a lovely book.

And yes, I said retyping. I sometimes have a hard time making myself do it, but I find that the most effective revision method for me involves actually retyping the text; I'm much more likely to make real changes that way, and it improves the story immensely.

I think I retyped Bodies in Motion four times in total. Hopefully, this book won't require quite that much typing!