I do think the book is much better now, which is a relief. :-)
Finished revisions to…
Finished revisions to Part IV. It's all going very quickly now, since I'm mostly cutting and adapting to the new stuff that was added in this draft. Current word count: 92,067. Down from 103,907, so I've cut about 10K. Good, but more could go. We'll see what survives in the next section.