Those of you reading parts 1 & 2 -- things to look for: intensity/drama/importance of each scene, continued depth of presence of storytelling element and family relationships, consistency of characterization throughout.
Rest of today, student stuff.
Finished revisions to…
Finished revisions to chapter 11. Still aiming to be done by October 31st. Madness, is what it is. Talked to Bob today, and he gave me a better idea of the timeline; bound manuscript by December sales meeting, galleys for long-lead magazines by January. Sheesh.
Thanks for the notes on what to look for/comment on.