Thanks to Andy Wilson, Greg Bennett, Veronica Arreola, Harmony Scofield, Kat Tanaka Okopnik, Patricia Campbell, Morrisa Sherman, Eva, Greg Bennett, Swati Joshi, Carolyn Charron for their comments on my short story, “Paper Star.” It’s an odd little piece, but I am fond of it, and I finally got around to implementing their revision notes this morning (only about oh, a year and a half after they sent them, sigh).
I think I’m going to show the latest draft to Jed today, see what he thinks, whether it’s ready to go out, or maybe needs another pass through my local writing workshop. (I did the original draft long enough ago that I can’t remember if I actually showed this to them — Julie, do you remember a story about a young woman who worked in a visa processing office on Kriti?)