All the POVs

I was waffling about including this POV, esp. early on, but now that I’ve drafted it, I like it. ALL the POVs. (Sorry, Susan Lee. It’s just how I think, I think.)

“War was coming to the galaxy, the first real war; there was no avoiding it now. The evidence was written in the blood of the flyers on Ariel, the withdrawal of the aquatics on Eris. When worlds were shaken, those who lived on them had better hold on tight to what they had. He could see it coming, and if people would stop getting in his way, the thousands of humans who owed loyalty to House Chelliah would be rewarded with safety in the coming storm. But now, now it seemed like all Dinesh did was race around, trying to fix everyone else’s stupid mistakes.”

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