I'm changing the subtitle, I think -- the old one gave too much of a long epic feel. So here are my two new options for title:
Rasathi: The Divided Island (book one)
Rasathi: The Shattered Island (book one)
Do you like them? Any preference? I'm leaning towards the second, but am a little worried that it sounds overly dramatic.
Another option would be to change island to land, which might flow a little better, but it's less specific to my story, which does all take place on an island (which is both divided and shattered :-). I.e.:
Rasathi: The Divided Land (book one)
Rasathi: The Shattered Land (book one)
My main problem with those latter two is actually that they remind me too strongly of Donaldson. :-)