Lunch, then onwards.
Also, great essay on black, fat, mammies, elites, uplift. I was sort of vaguely aware of a lot of this, but it helps a lot to have it spelled out.
Morning update: chapter…
Morning update: chapter 5-6 revised, much playing of Kavi with doggies. Ursa did knock her over once, in her enthusiastic puppiness, and Kavi was a little freaked out, but it wasn't long before they'd adapted to each other. Ursa is more of a licker than Ellie, and Kavi laughs out loud at every puppy kiss.