Hmm...I think I'd better pause now. I adapted "Sister Mary" as well, but this one came out to only four pages, and that was even with adding a paragraph of monologue and a few lines of dialogue. I'm having a hard time telling how much I can just leave to action, and how much I should translate to new dialogue. I need feedback before I go further, I think. But it's all fun. :-)
It's been a while since writing felt like fun. Maybe I should've paid more attention to that.