Jennifer and Shannon…

Jennifer and Shannon both met me at the cafe (Jennifer beat me here, and called demanding to know where I was :-). Oh, and hey, Neil just arrived. Everyone's so diligent -- we'll see if we keep it up.

I'm pretty happy with the work so far; my story was progressing in predictable narrative form, and I just found it boring boring boring. I've spent the last hour cutting and pasting and revising bits and bobs, and now instead of three short straightforward chapters, I have one long tangled confusing one. Much better. :-)

Now I get to try to do that for chapter 4-6 / 2.