I think if I had time to do another full draft, I might end up cutting some (instead of adding, which was most of what I needed to do this draft). But not very much. There's just a lot that happens.
Okay, quick lunch break, then chapter 19, which should go fast. It's mostly okay as is, I think, though a bit short. Chapter 20 is also generally good, but needs the conflict levels ramped up. Still hopefully of finishing them (and Part IV with them) today, before the Kriti meeting at 5.