Revising “Seven Cups”…

Revising "Seven Cups" -- four nights down, three to go, and I've cut 900 words without cutting any scenes. I haven't had to cut anything I loved; mostly it's just been trimming the words down, losing a few lines here and there. It's better. Now comes a long scene, though, the bit with the chili paste. We'll see.

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